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  Douglas Wallace - Why I write

Posted by Meenoo Rami in Reading, Writing, and Rising Up - Rami on Tuesday, October 18, 2011 at 3:06 pm
​I write because I have to

Life issues haunt us all

So instead of picking up a bottle

I pick up a pen and

Let my story begin...

I write to free my brothas and sistas

My story isn't the only important one

So I will tell the story of June

Suffering from post-love depression

She was never taught this lesson

So she slits her wrist to pour out a confession...

Or for my brotha from another momma 

Who never had a poppa to tell him

How a real man is supposed to act.

It's hard for a mother to play father

And keep food on the table..

So little David sold a brick got locked up

And now by the government she is labled

So when I write I tell their true stories

Like they are fables..

I write to tell a story

It's funny how many people could actually relate

Your fate isn't just your alone..

You would be surprised how many lives

Your pen could save.

I write because this is what I love

No matter what I've gone through

My pen has always been here

My poetry book is my soul

I put my right hand on it 

When I tell the truth..

Writing tells the story of the life I live

I am constantly faces with quandaries that stretch

The boundaries on my tight-knit life.

You can validate my soul by reading my poems..

My book pass no judgement

My pen keeps all my secrets

My mind brings these things together in unison.

I create a 3 dimensional world 

On a 2 dimensional surface

This is why I write..

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BMW car ad

Posted by Kashif Ahmad in Reading, Writing, and Rising Up - Rami on Friday, January 27, 2012 at 8:04 am

​For my advertisement I chose to do a ad that was clear and got its message across to everyone. In my opinion nowadays ads has becoming "mind twisters". Ad producers gets their message across but it makes the audience think about the ad for a while then they get the message. 



  
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Q2 English Ad BM: Make-A-Wish Foundation

Posted by Zayd Alsardary in Reading, Writing, and Rising Up - Rami on Wednesday, January 25, 2012 at 11:29 am

​In my case, I wasn't really promoting a product, I was actually trying to promote a non-profit organization that is making a big difference in the world and trying to help those in need. The non-profit organization that I chose was the Make-A-Wish Foundation. I chose the Make-A-Wish Foundation because not only are they granting wishes for the sick, needy children who really need a wish to come true, but they put smiles on those kids faces especially with everything that is going on in their lives. Also, my brother was actually granted a wish from the Make-A-Wish Foundation, and it inspired me even more. My intended audience is adults, or people who want to make a difference in their communities. Aim at people with a lot of money who are willing to donate for a cause worth fighting for. I think this is an effective way to reach my audience because the Make-A-Wish Foundation actually doesn't really advertise much and looking at a picture using the many ways to catch a person's attention in an ad will be effective in maybe sparking something. Poster ads are pretty effective themselves. If I were to do this BM again, I would not procrastinate and use my time a bit more wisely. Also, I would add on an actual commercial, especially since I had a whole one in my mind that I just needed to put together. I found this BM really interesting and it taught me alot about ads, how to set up ads to be effective, theyre role in media, and what they are trying to sell to the consumer, etc. Hope you enjoy.
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Laughter-Marina Stuart

Posted by Marina Stuart in Reading, Writing, and Rising Up - Rami on Tuesday, January 24, 2012 at 9:11 pm


My product is a print advertisement for Laughter. Laughter is something that is in need in the world today, we have wars, poverty, homelessness, and other depressing things. This advertisement it so remind people to laugh, be happy, and appreciate the little things in life. 

The intended audience is well, everyone. There is no set age, race, or class that this is aim towards, it is for everyone.  The advertisement aims to include most demographics, including age, race, and gender. 

The inspiration of this ad came from usual medicine ads. Most ads for medicine include lots of people liked their new medication but the side effects of the ads usually are worse then the illness they are trying to cure. For example some allergy ads have the side effect of a stroke...thats just not right. That is why the ads has a humorous warning label, to make fun of usual medicine ads, and perhaps make people laugh. 

This ad is also effective because of the quote used at the top of the ad. "I love to laugh, loud and long, and clear" That quote is from Mary Poppins, almost every person knows that line and reminds them of a simpler time and a movie that most kids love.

If this ad could be redone I think the pictures would focus more of the people's faces and but more laughter centric, or perhaps have humorous pictures of animals or toys, to simply funny things. 

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Natikwa - Sharpie

Posted by Natikwa Goodwin in Reading, Writing, and Rising Up - Rami on Friday, January 20, 2012 at 2:11 pm

​ The product my ad is promoting is Sharpie writing utensils. The message that is given is "Make It Loud". This message means that you can turn a simple something into something loud, vibrant, and fun. My intended audience in this ad is students, and artists. In my ad I incorporate a student that is doing work, that isn't interested in it. I chose students as my target audience because I know a lot of them can relate. I also intended this ad to be for artists because I use simple utensils to make a art piece, which I know would attract artist. If I was to complete this project again I would have made a more detailed piece of artwork using the sharpies.
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Q2 Apple Satire - Ian McClendon

Posted by Ian McClendon in Reading, Writing, and Rising Up - Rami on Friday, January 20, 2012 at 10:28 am

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As we see in society everyone owns a iPhone, iPad, or any other Apple product and it seems to symbolize/ portray the sense of the Apple Inc. being a independent and creative company. The use of their technology, don’t get me wrong, is very customizable and can be controlled with ease but would it occur to the typical user that Apple created their own software, interfaces, or processing modules that makes their iPhone so unique? The answer is no/ not quite. The way I would describe Apple Inc. in the global market is being a Patent Troll to all. 

So what I’ve tried to create here is a Apple Satire of the iPhone and how unoriginal I see as being. In my poster I point out specific applications and programs and then expose how the Patent Troll Apple is not who they seem to be. Also what such a profit they make from someones creation. In each box deriving from the application I show the inventor, description of patent, and the price that Apple bought.  
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Q2 Advertisement Benchmark

Posted by Douglas Wallace in Reading, Writing, and Rising Up - Rami on Friday, January 20, 2012 at 8:18 am

My product is the commercial for the documentary I am making for the non-profit organization called Phresh Philadelphia. Because of what Phresh Philly stands for (neighborhood cleanup and community empowerment) I decided to record what my neighborhood looked like on my way to school.

My intended audience would be the people of the community, so they can open their eyes to what is going on. The city is in shambles outside of center city, and folks who reside in the center city area, believe Philadelphia is fine. A news report video I saw did nothing but prove the ignorance of the people in Philadelphia, especially those people whom aren't living in these impoverished areas.

I believe this commercial was a great way to get to people to start off. The second one would reach the audience in a different way, but this is more of a "can you see it?" type of commercial. I wanted to go for something new, and not the typical commercial that you would normally see. If I were to do this again, I would definitely figure out that I couldn't use Final Cut a little earlier. I spent some precious time figuring that out before I switched to using iMovie. If I would have known that sooner, I would have definitely created both commercials to share at this time.


A Phresher Philadelphia
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Q2 Benchmark: Samson's Snake Oil

Posted by Joshua Martin-Corrales in Reading, Writing, and Rising Up - Rami on Friday, January 20, 2012 at 8:07 am

The product I sold for this project is snake oil, the thing people peddled back in the wild west, claiming it to have potency in curing all sorts of ailments. My snake oil is supposedly completely sincere, and the message is that it has a potency beyond all else. I wrote several ads aimed at several groups of people, and I hope that I hit everyone. I used print ads and a radio ad, and I believe these are effective because the immediate impact is greater. If I did this again, I would probably actually make a video ad, or maybe several radio ads, I just feel like I could've done a bit more.
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Q2 Advertising Benchmark

Posted by Michael Dea in Reading, Writing, and Rising Up - Rami on Friday, January 20, 2012 at 7:48 am

By Henry Yam and Michael Dea

The aim of our advertising campaign was to promote the use of paper books as opposed to ebook readers such as the Kindle and Nook because we felt that they are superior to such devices. This idea comes from their being able to be lent to others without a major risk of losing an expensive device, their ability to go anywhere without financial risk, etc. The message we hope to convey through our four posters was to get people to use actual books rather than ebook readers such as the Kindle or Nook. The intended audience of our ad campaign is people ranging from early high school onward. This is believed to be an effective means by which to convey our message to our audience because it can be put into magazines or online. Furthermore, it is rather out of the ordinary for people of a younger age because they are not like the normal motion ads that are displayed online and almost everywhere.
If we were to do this project again, most likely we would change the kind of people we included in our ads. Instead of using historical figures, we would implement more contemporary people whom many more would recognize with relative ease. In addition to this, the implementation of quotes from such people about reading would most likely increase the effectiveness of the ad by showing a kind of "endorsement" of the product.
Rosa Parks Ad
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McLove Not War: A New Kind Of Burger!

Posted by Ali Ahmed in Reading, Writing, and Rising Up - Rami on Friday, January 20, 2012 at 7:48 am

Jobe, Tim, Ali​

1) We are marketing the McLove Burger. A new burger for McDonald's that brings people together. It is a parody of how McDonald's and other fast food chains present their restaurants and food as something that can easily be shared by people of every kind of origin and belief together.

2) Our audience is anyone old enough to have seen the McDonald's Ad's and recognize that these diverse ethnic groups sharing a meal at McDonald's doesn't accurately portray reality. And of course recognize the various famous figures we use in our images.

3) Because one it's humorous and the figures are very easily recognized which can easily draw people attention to the images.

4) We would have chosen/modified some of the people and images used in our selections.

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Jason Davis: Founding Fathers

Posted by Jason Davis in Reading, Writing, and Rising Up - Rami on Wednesday, November 9, 2011 at 12:11 pm

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