Hey, Aysha. You are very descriptive and creative. The story remembered Superman because he was discovering his power. Also, it remembered Legends of Tomorrow because they time traveled in the show. I notice that you had some writing issues in your paragraphs. The dialogues had some structural issues.
This story made me think about people or specifically parents letting go. They get attached to their children and may become afraid of how their kids will react to the outside world or be treated but sooner or later they have to let go and give their kids space to learn on their own.
This story made me think about the relationship between two people, a grandma and a grandson. Why did the grandma not get rid of the powers instead of constantly running away with it?
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