My new slide
From the criticism I received, I learned that my slide was too buisy. The background of my slide was too stretched, and the quote was spread out everywhere. The number 10 on the soccer player's sleeve was too close to the quote and seemed irrelevant in my slide. The font of my quote did not pop and the contrast of the quote on the silhouette was too distracting.
I made my new slide more simple. I changed my quote to something that described me in fewer words. I placed my new quote underneath the soccer player. The dividing line in my new background is pleasing to the viewers. I lined up the beginning of my quote to the soccer players cleats and the end of the quote to the goalpost. I chose white as the color of the font to contrast with the green. I used Architect's daughter as my font because it makes it appear like the soccer player wrote it.
I modeled my slide after Presentation Zen. I used the rule of thirds, the soccer player's legs, the soccer ball, and my quote. The soccer player also bleeds off of the page making the slide look as though there is more to the slide. There is a lot of negative space which gives my slide a nice touch. In conclusion, I took the criticism I was given and executed a better slide.
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