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Posted by Naasir Spencer in Technology - Freshman · Hull · d1 Band on Thursday, January 25, 2018 at 10:17 am

I choose the way for my slide to look since the 4 images I chosen represents things that I did or originally my one slide was cluttered and that images were bigger I took a little bit of inspiration from Jonathan’s slides. I also chose the colors red and white for text because they’re complimentary colors for each other

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Remix Slide- Aigner Turner

Posted by Aigner Turner in Technology - Freshman · Hull · d1 Band on Friday, January 19, 2018 at 8:18 pm

IntroTech- One Slide Presentation
From the critique of my slide I learned that I should make my slide about what truly matters to me.  At first I had stuff that makes up what I am, but then I realized I should something that I truly value. From doing research from the sites you gave us, I learned that the size of a single slide can take up room so the slide won't look so spacy and to use bright colors to make it pop. Some sources I used was zachholman.com.
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REMIX 1: Google slide relfection

Posted by Gary Bartley in Technology - Freshman · Hull · d1 Band on Tuesday, January 2, 2018 at 9:24 pm

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​Gary bartley 
9th grade Tech          
12.7.17
              What I learned from the critique of my slide is it’s about the message and the point you are  trying to get across.Minimize them to get just a few simple words.The Audience should be listening not reading,and the fonts are an important part of engaging your audience.This is some of the things that I as a presenter have understood so far.

The reason I made the changes I made on my slide was because the slide layout I picked was depending on my color and the fonts to be arranged on my slide.If people had to squint during my presentation that something I 
had to change because if they can’t understand what’s 
on your slide then you’ve lost your audience.The biggest change I had to make was making the small font to a large font and change my picture to a different one for the the words to fit also.
 
The research I did helped me create one of the best slides 
because when you know more information about presenting to your audience and designing a great presentation about you but mostly about who you are presenting to.I learn more about fonts then I ever knew about fonts depending on your picture and design.

The sources I used to create an amazing slide was 5 sources Gifs,website called secure https:DoIt.edu,I also used google as one to help me with my slide.Most of these websites and sources helped me alot and little but thanks to my research I now know more and did more to this is my essay.
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Iman Ahmed New Slide

Posted by Iman Ahmed in Technology - Freshman · Hull · d1 Band on Thursday, December 7, 2017 at 9:22 pm

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  • What did you learn from the critique of your slide?                                     I learned to not make bullet points because it will distract the audience and to never use Comic Sand.
  • Why did you make the changes you made to the slide?                               I made it much simpler and more put together.
  • How did the research you did help to create a better slide?                     It helped me make my slide more put together and at the same time make sense.
  • What were some of the sources you used to create an amazing slide?          I used the presentation zen to my advantage and i also searched google for examples to give me an idea.
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Tyshon's Life

Posted by Tyshon Wooden in Technology - Freshman · Hull · d1 Band on Thursday, December 7, 2017 at 3:24 pm

The Life Of Tyshon (Remix)

What I learned from the critique of my slide was that I needed to make my pictures blend together in a better way. I also learned that my slide shouldn’t have too many colors because that might distract the viewers from the point that I’m trying to make. Another thing that I learned was to make my title stand out from the pictures so the viewers would know what my slide is about.


Based off the critique of my slide I made several changes. The first thing I did was I thought of what my theme of the slide should be. I chose to make it blue. Then I found pictures that fit the theme of my slide. I know some of the blues are different but I tried my best to match the blues. After that I made the pictures even and balanced out.


The research that I did helped me make a better slide because it gave me advice on how to make a presentable slide. It showed me what it takes to make a slide more appealing to the viewer and why certain slides are better than others. The sources that I used was Presentation Zen and a video about slide designing.


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One Slide Remake- Yasir Thomas

Posted by Yasir Thomas in Technology - Freshman · Hull · d1 Band on Thursday, December 7, 2017 at 10:24 am

IntroTech- 1 Slide Remake (2)
I learned that I shouldn’t have a lot of pictures crowding my slides. People told that words were hard to read and that the quote should be bigger. Also, either all of the pictures should be rotated or none of them should. I didn’t have to put as much stuff on my slide as I needed to at all.
I started from scratch again with my slide because I used too much space on my slide. I also didn’t use any of the rules that I researched on my slide either. This time I used less space than what I did the first time. I took out all of my pictures and only put one this time. I still used my quote and my name. Another thing that I changed was the font of my name and quote.
The research helped me to use bigger font sizes and more professional fonts. I also tried to use the contrast rules and rule of the thirds. Then I used empty space on the sides of my slide around the text. The sources that I used were Elements of Design Defined, Presentation Zen, and Slide Design Link.
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Remix

Posted by Maxwell Lewis in Technology - Freshman · Hull · d1 Band on Thursday, December 7, 2017 at 10:22 am

POSTER for tech (4)
My original slide was pretty good, but this time I will make this remix even better. the first comment I got was that the pictures need a background and so I did just that. I added the backgrounds with grey on two of the pictures and blue on one. The second comment is that I need to change the text font. I change it into the Playfair Display font. 

Other changes I made was I changed the background color too blue. Also I made it smaller so I could fit in the pictures. I learned from research that I have to make the the backgrounds with the pictures. also I learned that I have to make the pictures 3/4 long.

Some self influenced things I added was that I change the name to Max Lewis. I made the max white and the lewis black. I also took out the swirls and replaced it by making the pictures bigger. Lastly I learned a lot from this remix because the new set of research was more informational and helpful.
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Saniyyah's Remix Slide

Posted by Saniyyah Ray in Technology - Freshman · Hull · d1 Band on Thursday, December 7, 2017 at 10:21 am

As I redid my 1 slide I took everything my classmates said about my first slide into consideration. They said I had a lot of different colors and my slide was a little crowded. I decided that in my second slide that I was going to get rid of a lot of colors. I kept it pretty simple with the colors black and white and added a little pink in as well. I matched the picture of myself which had pink in it , with the pink inside the music notes.

I added one of my favorite quotes because I strongly believe it and it shows what type of person I am. I also added it to fill up the open space in the middle of my slide. I was thinking about adding pictures but then my slide would have started getting crowded so I used a quote. Also in my research I learned to limit the text. I did not add a lot of words, I added just enough.

Overall I think I did a better job my second time doing this 1 slide then the first. I learn to not add lots and lots of pictures. I learned to limit the words on my slide and to use colors wisely. The research and my classmates really made me realize that my slide needed to be clean and pretty simple. The website that helped me with my one slide was Presentation Zen garrreynolds.com and Elements of Design Defines. These websites taught me a lot and making slides will now be more easier to do knowing what I know now.


SANIYYAH RAY!
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Kofi's New Slide (It's The Remix!)

Posted by Kofi Kohl in Technology - Freshman · Hull · d1 Band on Thursday, December 7, 2017 at 10:17 am

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I did my first draft of this project in an hour, and assumed it was fine. I didn't realize all it's flaws until I was presenting. This time I made sure to line everything up and leave more blank space. I learned from the critique of my slide how much different shades of colors (I tried to fix it but it would've erased all the other details of the griffin). I also learned how important the right spacing of things is, and how less is better, so I up sized the title and down sized the words, and then moved them to the center of the page and lined them up with the divide in the slide format.
When I looked back at the research, I started to realize things I didn't realize before, and when I used them on my slide I realized it looked a lot better. When everything was centered the slide looked a lot cleaner, and putting some words in the red half helped everything meld together. 
The source I used most were billboards I saw on the highway. They helped me realize what I could read quickly and focus on, and what I couldn't. I also used the Presentation Zen website a lot. I scrolled through some videos of presentations, mainly TED talks. All of this helped me put my slide together.
~Kofi Kohl
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Slide Remake: Abel Solomon

Posted by Abel Solomon in Technology - Freshman · Hull · d1 Band on Thursday, December 7, 2017 at 10:15 am

One Slide Project (1)

Through the critique of my slide, I’ve learned the importance of taking your time while designing something. On my first draft, I rushed my assignment and as a result I didn’t use any of the strategies we learned through the videos. Not to mention the fact, that the background color didn’t fit the theme. But, after I received my constructive criticism, I bled all of my pictures, and I chose a more suitable background color.

The changes I made to my slides incorporated the advice used from the videos that we were linked. I wanted to keep my slide straight to the point. So I chose white as a background so it wouldn’t make the slide pop. This was really the only way to achieve it because I already went for a simplistic approach. The most influential source of those we received was the presentation zen.

The research that I used ended up helping me in a variety of ways. First and foremost we have bleeding. Prior to reading the article I had no understanding of bleeding whatsoever. However, after reading I used the bleeding technique. Then, I learned how important keeping it simple can be. With complex designs using bright colors and such, it often takes away the meaning of the design. So, instead of using a bright green for a background color, I used white.


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