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Ayala Silverman Capstone

Posted by Ayala Silverman in Capstone · Ames/Hirschfield · Wed on Wednesday, May 1, 2019 at 7:06 pm
For my capstone, I wanted to explore the importance of an author’s voice and what makes a literary work distinctive. I aimed to bring attention to the subtle details and nuances in the way authors write that gives their stories depth and character that differ from other authors. To do this, I researched how writing styles change over time and what components factor into making an author’s style unique. I wrote four short stories emulating four different authors’ styles using my research and initial idea. Instead of directly trying to copy the styles of writing, I took frequently used plot-lines and literary elements from each authors’ works and integrated it into my own writing. Throughout my writing process, I began to appreciate each authors’ writing style more and it also made me more aware of the distinctiveness of my own style.

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Annotated Bibliography


1. Brundage, David. 2019. "Elements Of Writing Style". Accessed January 24 2019.

A large part of what makes up an author’s distinct writing style is how they utilize literary elements. This article aims to explain these elements and how they should generally be used. It explains in depth what each element means and provides examples of how they’re used in writing. For my project, I will need to take notes on how the authors use these elements in their stories and I will use this article as a source for what stylistic choices to look for while reading. I believe this source is reliable because it was adapted from an English course text from Athabasca University by an academic author.


2. Dumas, Alexandre. 1844. The Count Of Monte Cristo.

“The Count of Monte Cristo” is a hefty novel by Alexandre Dumas, one of the authors I aim to emulate in my project. The story consists of a young man that is sabotaged by his business partners and goes to prison. Once out of prison, the man becomes involved in crime in order to get revenge against those who wronged him. I will be using this book for my project because it was written in a significantly different time period than the other novels I am emulating. This will give me a lot of content to compare how writing has changed over time, especially between the 1840s and the 2010s. I will also read through the brief introduction written by Richard Church in order to gain further understanding of Dumas and his novel. This is a credible source because it is a novel written by Dumas himself.


3. Famous Authors And Their Writing Styles - Craft Your Content". 2017. Craft Your Content. Accessed January 24 2019. https://www.craftyourcontent.com/famous-authors-writing-styles/.

This article delves into different famous authors and how and why they were so influential. It mentions many great writers from across all time periods and genres. It marks the importance of each authors’ unique writing style and how that difference made them so “revolutionary” (as the website kept referring to them). I won’t be using this source actively within my project, but instead more passively. The concept of unique writing styles based on time period, experiences, and the potential to change an environment through writing is something that I should keep in mind while emulating authors that have had a significant impact in the writing world. This is a credible source because it was written on a website made for writers and writing tips. (The author, while not well known to my knowledge, also makes sure that her name is both before and after the article.)


4. Harmetz, Aljean. 1987. "STEVE MARTIN REVISES 'CYRANO'". Nytimes.Com. Accessed January 25 2019. https://www.nytimes.com/1987/07/12/movies/steve-martin-revises-cyrano.html.

This article explains in detail the process that writer Steve Martin went through recreating the 19th-century play “Cyrano de Bergerac”. It starts from the beginning, with him drawing inspiration from the play to create a more modern, less tragic story. It also documented his struggles with writing and editing the script in order to be the best he believed it could. I have drawn both inspiration and insight from reading this article. I believe that my process will be somewhat similar to Martin’s even though I’m simply emulating instead of recreating in a new setting. In the article, Martin mentions that he would constantly scrap ideas and that a writer shouldn’t be afraid to start over -- this is important for me to remember so that I don’t get stuck with writer’s block. This is a reliable source because it was an interview of Steve Martin from the physical New York Times written in 1996.


5. "Moses And The Man Of Steel ". 2019. Psychology Today. Accessed January 25 2019. https://www.psychologytoday.com/us/blog/the-hero-in-you/201409/moses-and-the-man-steel.

Writing, especially in the narrative style, consists of embellishments and implementation of fantasy. This article first criticizes how humans tend to state things literally and accurately before commenting on human morality. This is connected to heroism throughout history where the article’s author compares the story of Moses to that of Superman. He draws comparisons between each story and of the main characters’ lives, explaining how the similarities were intentional so that Superman could be a source of comfort for people. This source does not comment on emulation, but it does write about a concept that is similar. The article gave me insight as to how I could potentially emulate themes or ideas from my chosen authors. This is a reliable source because it written by a professor and writer.


6. Mummini, Swathi. 2019. " ARTS IN NEW YORK CITY - West Side Story And Romeo And Juliet". Eportfolios.Macaulay.Cuny.Edu. Accessed January 25 2019. https://eportfolios.macaulay.cuny.edu/leval2009/2009/09/13/west-side-story-and-romeo-and-juliet/.

This article discusses the similarities between Shakespeare’s “Romeo and Juliet” and the movie “West Side Story”. The author describes the similar concepts and themes within both media and how “West Side Story” drew inspiration from the play. Similarly, the concept of forbidden love has been used across media for decades. I will be using this source because the process of recreating a story and emulating a story is pretty similar. Since I am emulating an author instead of using my own writing style, I will have to give a personal twist on the story itself. This source has given me insight on how to do so. This is a credible source because it was published by a student attending CUNY.


7. Paris, Ask, Submit Question, Submit Review, Hat TIPs, Get TIP, and Ivan Ross. 2017. "How Important Is An Author’S Writing Style?". Blogs.Tip.Duke.Edu. Accessed January 24 2019. https://blogs.tip.duke.edu/insights/2017/10/16/how-important-is-an-authors-writing-style/.  

Writing style isn’t necessarily always about technique, but also about the author’s voice. An important part of narrative writing is the author’s voice and this article discusses this idea. It also provides examples of how different styles can affect the flow and meaning of a passage. I will be using this source as inspiration and an example for how my emulations should turn out. The article has given me insight on the idea that how I write should be the focus of the story, not necessarily what I write. This is a reliable source because it is a blog post made by members of Duke University.


8. R. R. Martin, George. 1996. A Game Of Thrones.

The book “A Game of Thrones” is the novel I chose to help me emulate George R. R. Martin. I’m not entirely sure what the book is about, as there are many different character lines to follow. However, it is filled with plenty of death, angst, and character building. I will be using this story in order to gain a concept of how to write similarly to R. R. Martin. For this author in particular, I will be paying close attention to his sentence structure and general flow of the story. This is a credible source because it’s written by the author that I am drawing inspiration from in my project.


9. Schwab, V. E. 2015. A Darker Shade Of Magic.

This novel is also one of the main books that I will be emulating in my project. This book and the two others listed have significant gaps in time between the dates they were published. This is so I can make note of the change in styles through history and over large spans of time. “A Darker Shade of Magic” follows two main characters: a young man yearning for freedom from his surrogate family and a young woman desperate to travel the world. This author will be slightly easier to emulate because of her more modern writing style (and while not extremely similar, it’s closer to my own style than the other novels). This is a reliable source because it is written by V. E. Schwab, an author I will be emulating.


10. "Writing Styles". 2019. Whs.Wsd.Wednet.Edu. Accessed January 24 2019. http://whs.wsd.wednet.edu/faculty/cloke/WritingStyles.html.

This website follows the most popular writing styles and topics that authors used throughout American history. It documents the form of writing in which the stories were transcribed and the eras that the style of writing was most used. I will use this website to compare the popular style of the era and the writing of the author from that time period. Using this website to check the author and their era, I will be able to more accurately document how styles might change over time (disregarding an author’s personal taste, to an extent). This is a reliable source because it was put together by an English teacher from Wenatchee High School.


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Audio Silence Podcast #3

Posted by Ayala Silverman in College English · Giknis · B Band on Tuesday, January 15, 2019 at 5:21 pm
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​Group:
Ayala, James, David, Kwan, Eric 

Description:
In this episode of Audio Silence, we discuss Author's Intent in George Orwell's book, 1984. The book was written during the period after World War II and reflects this by delving into government and government control. Orwell wanted the book to serve as a warning to the power government has over its people. 

Link:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WTY886OHX2U

Book References:
- Government surveillance (37)
- Government brainwashing (10-15)
- Ignorance and following the government blindly (56)
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The Pocket Watch

Posted by Ayala Silverman in English 3 · Pahomov · A Band on Wednesday, May 30, 2018 at 11:27 pm
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2Fer #7 - Food in Culture

Posted by Ayala Silverman in English 3 · Pahomov · A Band on Monday, April 23, 2018 at 1:15 am

When asked what an important part of culture is, one might say the language, the music, or the history. While all of these are indeed necessary elements to a culture, they lack the ability to be easily shared with others. Music has the capability of being shared with everyone, however, messages and meanings within the words of the songs can be lost due to language barriers. On the other hand, food does not require language or words to be understood. Food is one of the most important aspects of a culture because of how it represents that culture and its traditions.

Within a culture, food can represent its history. Amy Choi, an author at TED, wrote, “American cuisine is shaped by the natural wealth of the country. Having never faced agricultural hardship, Americans had the luxury of not relying on rotating crops…” Often, traditions that have carried on into modern times started because of food availability and the method of preparing it. Cultural dishes that are still made now were influenced by what the world was like when it first came into creation. For example, many dishes in the Jewish culture are based on where people lived and what food became available during specific times. During the Diaspora, when the Jews were being forced to move around a lot, they had to assimilate into the cultures of the areas they lived in. This resulted in many of those cultural dishes being shaped and incorporated into Jewish tradition. What started as a necessity to live became part of the culture and got passed down through the generations.

Food can also display status and respect. In many cultures, the type of food and way it is prepared is a symbol of one’s status. In an article written by PMC, it is stated, “Food also plays an important role with respect to an individual’s place in society. As Counihan observed, ‘One’s place in the social system is revealed by what, how much, and with whom one eats.’” Expensive foods are commonly used to display one’s wealth and status in society. Because of this, food is used to show one’s respect to another person. Expensive food, or food someone usually would not eat, would often be prepared in order to honor guests. Another way to show respect is how food is positioned on the table. In Chinese culture, when eating fish, the head is positioned towards the most respected member at the table and should not be moved from that location. Similarly, only after the most respected member has started eating can everyone else also begin.

One of the most important sides of food in culture is the symbolism. Food can have different meanings based on what it is made of and how it is prepared and presented. An article by Guansheng Ma at ScienceDirect says, “Food has many symbolic meanings; it not only expresses but also establishes the relationship between people and their environment as well as between people and what they believe.” A good example of this is the Jewish holiday, Passover, where almost everything in the meal represents something. The meal itself is a ceremony of remembrance to what happened to the Jews before and after they fled Egypt. A staple food of the holiday is matzah, an unleavened bread, which the Jews eat to remember their hasty exodus out of Egypt. During a Seder, this is typically eaten with horseradish and charoset to represent the bitterness of slavery and the mortar Jews used to build while enslaved. Another example of symbolism is found in foods eaten during Chinese New Year. When celebrating the New Year, the type of food and how it is prepared symbolizes the desires for that year. Dishes such as fish and dumplings represent prosperity and wealth, and are considered to foresee an auspicious year.    

In every culture, food means more than just nourishment. It can hold the culture’s history, struggles, and hopes within one dish. However, it does not have to be constrained to just those in the culture. When people who are not part of a certain culture eat a traditional dish, they get to experience a piece of that culture and possibly gain a newfound appreciation for the people and their history.  


Works Cited


Choi, Amy. "What Americans Can Learn From Other Food Cultures." ideas.ted.com. N. p., 2014. Web. 23 Apr. 2018. https://ideas.ted.com/what-americans-can-learn-from-other-food-cultures/


Ma, Guansheng. "Food, Eating Behavior, And Culture In Chinese Society." Journal of Ethnic Foods 2.4 (2015): 195-199. Web. 23 Apr. 2018.

https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S2352618115000657


Nordström, Karin et al. "Food And Health: Individual, Cultural, Or Scientific Matters?." Genes & Nutrition 8.4 (2013): 357-363. Web. 23 Apr. 2018.

https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC3689889/


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The Great Chase

Posted by Ayala Silverman in English 3 · Pahomov · A Band on Sunday, April 15, 2018 at 10:52 pm

The Great Chase

A comparison between “Taming of the Shrew” and “Ella Enchanted”


In the play, “The Taming of the Shrew,” there is a character, Lucentio, who has just arrived in Padua for school. When he first arrives, he happens to see another character, Bianca, who he immediately falls in love with and strives to meet again, even though she has no idea who he is. In the movie, “Ella Enchanted,” Prince Charmont is escaping from a frenzied horde of fangirls when he runs into Ella of Frell, who is not his biggest fan. While Ella is not excited to have run into him, Prince Charmont expresses hope in seeing her again.


Both the play and the movie have characters who fall in love with another after a brief encounter, expressing interest in trying to get closer to the other character. In the “Shrew,” Lucentio is new in town and nobody knows him, which gives him the hope that he will be able to gain Bianca’s attention and then affection. “Ella Enchanted” differs from the play since Prince Charmont is well known throughout the kingdom, however, he hopes to use his popularity to win Ella over in the beginning. These texts reflect that when someone falls in love with another person, regardless of whether or not they knew each other (or if one likes the other), they will try to pursue them in order to get a “happy ending”.


"...But see, while idly I stood looking on, I found the effect of love-in-idleness, and now in plainness do confess to thee that art to me as secret and dear as Anna to the Queen of Carthage was: Tranio, I burn, I pine! I perish, Tranio, if I achieve not this young modest girl.”

(Act 1, Scene I, 152-8)


At the beginning of the play, Lucentio is introduced as a student who has recently moved to Padua to continue his education. Upon his arrival, Lucentio witnesses a scene between Baptista and two suitors of his daughter, Bianca. After becoming enraptured with Bianca almost immediately, his hopes are dashed when Baptista makes it clear that Bianca’s sister must be married before she could be wed. Instead of becoming discouraged, Lucentio comes up with a plan to get closer to Bianca without her father becoming suspicious -- he’s going to act as her teacher. The reader can see that despite having several obstacles (e.g. barely knowing the girl and the father wanting the older sister to be married first), Lucentio is going to do whatever he can in order to get to Bianca. This quote shows Lucentio’s infatuation with Bianca and his want to acquire her.


Similarly in “Ella Enchanted,” Prince Charmont immediately takes an interest in Ella after running into her.


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Prince Charmont had been visiting Frell when a mob of his fangirls began to chase after him. While escaping, Prince Charmont runs into Ella as she is walking home, and tries to hide behind her. Ella, who is avidly against royalty and their treatment of the kingdom’s species, is not thrilled by this turn of events and brushes him off. Prince Charmont isn’t used to this treatment from the ladies and develops an interest in Ella. Despite Ella’s attempts at driving him away, Charmont insists on seeing her home. Unlike in the “Shrew,” Charmont and Ella interact before Charmont starts to like her and wants to pursue her. He hopes that by being courteous, she will warm up to him and eventually return his feelings. Prince Charmont’s infatuation with Ella when they first meet is much more subtle than Lucentio with Bianca -- he simply hopes that they’ll meet again instead of trying to trick her by impersonating her teacher.


“I read that I profess, The Art to Love.” “And may you prove, sir, master of your art.” “While you, sweet dear, prove mistress of my heart.” (They move aside and kiss and talk.)

(Act 4, Scene II, 8-10)


After Lucentio acted as Bianca’s schoolteacher, he tells her his true identity. While skeptical at first, over time she warms up to him despite his deceit. Though they have only known each other for a few days, the affection between them has grown. The dialogue between Bianca and Lucentio demonstrates to the reader how a person can fall in love with another and have the chase come to fruition. Besides verbally confessing their love for each other, there is also a physical display of affection that really seals the deal.


The budding romance between Lucentio and Bianca can also be seen between Prince Charmont and Ella.


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Ella and Prince Charmont are resting in an giant’s pub after several days of adventure. The two are sitting by the fire together and talking about their lives prior to meeting each other, along with other current events. After an especially touching moment where Ella tells Charmont that he will be a good king, he decides that he wants to kiss her. Similar to the scene from the play, this moment between Ella and Charmont shows the beginning of their relationship and how Ella was able to overcome the prince’s shortcomings (much like how Bianca overlooked Lucentio’s lies). This scene and the scene from the “Shrew” both reflect that a strong bond can be formed in only a few days as long as the effort is there.


“Gentlemen, importune me no farther, for how I firmly am resolved you know: that is, not to bestow my youngest daughter before I have a husband for the elder.”

(Act 1, Scene I, 48-51)


At the beginning of “The Taming of the Shrew,” Baptista is trying to drive away Bianca’s suitors by explaining that his eldest daughter had to be married first. In this way, Baptista is interfering in both Bianca’s love life as well as her sister’s. He wants to force someone to marry the older sister while also trying to find a better suitor for Bianca. In this way, Baptista is an obstacle in Lucentio’s path on his way to Bianca.


Although not a parent, Ella’s step-sister, Hattie, plays a similar role as Baptista in “Ella Enchanted”.


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Ella and Prince Charmont have just met and are arguing with each other when Hattie bumps into them. Hattie is shown to be an expressive fangirl of Charmont, and gets jealous upon seeing Ella close to the prince. Even though her reasoning for interfering and end goal differs from Baptista, she is also trying to prevent a relationship happening between Charmont and anybody but herself. Hattie realizes that there are already romantic feelings growing between her step-sister and the prince, and she wants to avert those feelings -- thus, becoming an obstacle in Charmont’s path to Ella.  


In both the play, “The Taming of the Shrew”, and the movie, “Ella Enchanted”, the main couples -- Lucentio and Bianca, and Charmont and Ella -- successfully marry each other in the end. In these cases, the pursuit of a person resulted in the “happy ending” for the characters involved. Even though this isn’t the most realistic scenario, there is a grain of truth in that when something or someone is desired, then it is worth striving towards.



Works Cited

Haver, Tommy O, director. Ella Enchanted . Netflix, Miramax, 2004


Shakespeare, William. The Taming of the Shrew. Edited by Barbara A. Mowat and Paul Werstine, Washington Square Press, 1992.

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A Tale In Digital Correspondence - Romancing

Posted by Ayala Silverman in Creative Writing · Giknis · x2 Band on Tuesday, June 6, 2017 at 7:36 pm
​A girl talks about a boy she likes to her best friend. She strikes up a conversation with him, but things don't go as planned.


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E2U6 Infográfica - Ameer, Ayala, Katie, Lauren

Posted by Ayala Silverman in Spanish 2 · Manuel · B Band on Wednesday, May 17, 2017 at 11:52 am
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A Private Post - Ayala

Posted by Ayala Silverman in Creative Writing · Giknis · x2 Band on Thursday, May 11, 2017 at 8:50 pm
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Nothing to Gain from Compromise - LotF Essay

Posted by Ayala Silverman in English 2 · Pahomov · C Band on Friday, March 31, 2017 at 9:43 am

A compromise is an agreement between two sides, usually with both sides winning and losing some. Compromises are made with hopes of a semi-peaceful ending. What happens when one side is not willing to compromise? It depends. In certain cases, this could result in both sides losing things. In other cases, if one side is weak, the possibility of a compromise between the two sides is less likely. The weaker side, not having much to give, might not see the point in compromising with the stronger side. On the other hand, the stronger side might already have everything they need, and see nothing to gain from the compromise with the other side. While compromise is important in some situations, either one of the sides in the conflict won’t be willing if they don’t think they could gain from it.

The book Lord of the Flies by William Golding, in which a group of boys are stranded on an island with no supervision, provides many examples that show why a side in a fight between two groups would not be open to compromise. In chapter ten of the book, Jack, one of the “leaders” of the groups, steals the glasses from his rival side’s advisor, Piggy, so that his “tribe” could make fire. In the next chapter, Ralph, the other “leader”, and Piggy go to get Piggy’s glasses back from Jack. Once they arrive and confront Jack, he demands for Ralph to leave. “You go away Ralph. You keep to your end. This is my end and my tribe. You leave me alone (176).” Even though not much had happened between the two groups in this scene, tension had already risen because of Jack’s previous actions and Ralph, the conflicting group, appearing in Jack’s “territory”. Since Jack stole the glasses from Ralph’s group in order to get the thing he wanted and needed, fire, more conflict was created between the two groups. At this point in the book, Jack’s crew is much larger than Ralph’s and Ralph makes it clear that he would have been willing to compromise with Jack if he had just asked to use the glasses. This demonstrates that the stronger side in a fight might not compromise with the opposing side because compromising wouldn’t benefit them.

Another example from the book that showcases issues regarding compromise is the scene soon after Ralph and Jack meet face to face with each other. During this scene, the two boys begin to argue, which leads them to start jabbing at each other with the butt ends of their spears. This continues for a short while before Ralph tries to reason with Jack again. “Listen. We’ve come to say this. First you’ve got to give back Piggy’s specs. If he hasn’t got them he can’t see. You aren’t playing the game—(177)” This quote further shows that Ralph would have been willing to cooperate with Jack and his crew. Ralph hoped that if all the boys were a big group again, things would operate smoother on the island. Instead of reasoning with Ralph, Jack continued to hold his grudge against Ralph, and did not want to change the “superior” way that he had built up his tribe. In this case, the weaker side wanted to compromise so they could be on equal ground as the stronger side. However, the stronger side in this scenario, Jack and his group, see no point in compromising with Ralph because they have nothing to gain from doing so. Compromising with Ralph would not have aided Jack’s agenda on the island any more than being forceful would. In fact, Jack believed he was strong enough that he didn’t need to compromise.

The conflict between Jack and Ralph in the book is not the only example of want and rejection of compromise. The Melian Dialogue was a meeting between the Melians and Athenians during the Peloponnesian War, with the Athenians wanting to compromise with the Melians and the Melians wanting to stay out of the war. The reason for The Melian Dialogue caused a very similar situation to what happened in the book, except it is reversed. Instead of the weaker side, the Melians, wanting to compromise, the stronger side, the Athenians, asked to compromise instead. The Athenians were going around offering to form alliances with other groups of people, relying on force to subdue them if they refused (similar to how Jack decided to steal Piggy’s glasses, except without the asking part first). Melians, inhabitants of Melos, wanted to be and stay neutral while other areas struggled with the Athenians. Eventually the Athenians targeted them to be allies as well. The Melians refused the Athenians, using their honor and hope as an excuse.

The Melians did not see how compromising would benefit either themselves or the Athenians. The only thing the Athenians promised them if they became allies was to spare Melos. The Melians were a small group of people and didn’t have much to give to the Athenians. In this event, the weaker side saw no point in compromising with the stronger side. The Athenians warned the Melians that they would take Melos by force if the Melian’s final answer was to not cooperate with them. The Melians figured that Melos was so small and weak compared to the Athenian forces that they would have nothing to give if they were allies, and nothing to lose if they refused. In the end, the Melians rejected the Athenians proposal, and the Athenians took Melos using force.

Compromise, in many cases, will help both sides reach their goal. When compromise is not an option or not an accepted tactic, usually one group comes out on top. More often than not, this group is the stronger one. The reason compromise is not a possibility is because while a strong group relies on force to get them what they want, the weak group depends more on hope to get where they want to go. These reasons prevent compromise between the groups. Regardless of which side is asking which to compromise in situations like these, the group being asked to compromise will not because they believe there is nothing to gain from working together.



Works Cited

Golding, William. Lord Of The Flies. New York: Penguin, 2006.


"The Melian Dialogue". Colorado.edu. N. p., 2017. Web. 31 Mar. 2017. http://www.colorado.edu/classics/clas2041/Lecture%20Outlines/LOMelian.htm


"The Melian Dialogue". Mtholyoke.edu. N. p., 2017. Web. 31 Mar. 2017. https://www.mtholyoke.edu/acad/intrel/melian.htm

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E2 U4 Leer Más - Mt. Airy

Posted by Ayala Silverman in Spanish 2 · Manuel · B Band on Thursday, March 23, 2017 at 7:42 pm
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Soy Ayala, vivo en Mt. Airy y vivo en mi barrio toda mi vida. Para mi, es un buen barrio pero es un poco aburrido. Cuando pienso en mi barrio, veo familias y grupos progresivos. Me gusta el área en general y la diversidad de la gente. No me gusta mis vecinos porque ellos dan mi familia problemas. Mi casa es en el lado oscuro de nuestra calle, así que no tiene sol y mi casa siempre frío. Me gusta donde vivo debido a mi familia y porque conozco el área también. No sé qué cambiaría en mi barrio.

Voy a crear mi mural en mi barrio, Mt Airy. Fue una parte pequeña de Germantown durante los 1700s. William Allen lo llamó Mt Airy después compra el área. Tiene muchas culturas diversas. Sin embargo, Mt Airy no tiene mucho grafiti, especialmente donde vivo en el barrio. Quiero crear un mural hacer el barrio bonito. Un lugar de mi mural es ideal porque muchas personas verlo como ellas caminan o manejan pasado, por lo tanto la gente puede ver el mensaje de mi mural. La mayoría de las personas en mi barrio ya le gusta leer, por eso ellos puede gustar el mural.

Mi mural es un libro grande con los palabras “Leer más, es sentirte mejor” escrito. El propósito de mi mural es para expresar un mensaje. Quiero hacer este diseño porque mi mural tiene un tema similar de los “little libraries” en mi barrio. Voy a incorporar imágenes de un libro porque es sencillo y la gente puede entenderlo. Voy a incorporar las palabras “Leer más, es sentirte mejor” porque es un mensaje simple pero bueno.

El propósito del arte público es transmitir un mensaje, así que mi mural llena el papel de arte público. En mi opinión, mi diseño es muy bonito. El mural representa la comunidad también y está ubicado en un lugar donde muchas personas pueden ver la pared. El diseño es sencillo pero fuerte y personas pueden entender.

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Venustiano Carranza - Naima y Ayala

Posted by Ayala Silverman in Spanish 2 · Manuel · B Band on Monday, March 13, 2017 at 9:41 am
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Una oda a Venustiano Carranza

Ambicioso, carismático, inteligente

Cuando yo te veo pienso en Santa Claus

Me inspiras y me motivas

Tú eres mi animal de espíritu


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Tarea: Foto

Posted by Ayala Silverman in Spanish 2 · Manuel · B Band on Sunday, March 5, 2017 at 6:53 pm
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Mi barrio es Mt Airy. Tiene muchas culturas diversas. Fue una parte pequeña de Germantown antes de William Allen comprara el área y lo llamó Mt Airy. Eso es todo.
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A Taste of Summer por Ann Northrup

Posted by Ayala Silverman in Spanish 2 · Manuel · B Band on Sunday, February 26, 2017 at 5:16 pm
ESPmural
ESPmural
Ubicado en: Vetri Ristorante, 1312 Spruce St.
 
3 cosas que este mural revela sobre la comunidad:
1. Gustan la comida
2. Disfrutan sus tiempo con la comunidad
3. Siempre es verano

2 objetos, imagenes, frases o palabras encontrados en el mural:
1. Follaje
2. Gente comiendo juntos

1 razón que es significativo para esta comunidad
1. Lo crea un buen ambiente por el gente de la comunidad
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Insolvency and Ice-cream

Posted by Ayala Silverman in English 2 · Pahomov · C Band on Monday, November 21, 2016 at 10:26 pm

Why has God forsaken me? What did I do in my past life to be treated in this way? Am I in hell? Please, God, if you’re listening, I’m sorry. I’m sorry I didn’t wave hello to stupid Ms. Jeckles. I’m sorry I didn’t pick up that most likely flea-infested dog. I don’t know what I’ve done but I’m sorry. It’s not fair, I’m a relatively good person, I should have money. (small pause) Maybe I should ask mom. Yeah. She should understand where I’m coming from. (pause) Then again, maybe not. She might get suspicious because I never call her. Ooh, I could probably text her. (pause) Maybe not, she’s always calling me disrespectful and if I text her asking for money then she will never shut up about it. (pause) In that case, then I’ll have to go meet her in person and that is way too much work. But that means that I have to call her and then she’ll probably yell at me over the ph–

(ring) Hello? (pause) Mom? (pause) What do you mean I have no emotion when I answer the phone, I have plenty of emotions. (pause) Yeah, yeah, okay, fine. Actually, it’s a good thing that you called because I have a question to ask. (pause) I swear on my life that it’s important. (pause) Can you lend me some money? (pause) Because you’re my mother and you’re supposed to pamper me. (pause) But moooooom, I’m too old to be getting up and running around like that! (pause) It doesn’t matter that I’m only twenty years old, my back says otherwise. (pause) What’s it for? (pause) Ice-cream sundaes.

(pause) Why are you yelling at me?! (pause) So what if I have money in the bank? That requires leaving the house and interacting with the nasty bank people. (pause) Mom, I barely have two pennies to rub together right now and Swanky Sundaes is really effing expensive! (pause) I do not have to act my age! (pause) Don’t “Lee, please” me, you’ve never gone through what I’m going through right now! (pause) Mom, you don’t understand. Listen, waiting in line for ice-cream sundaes is fun. Waiting in line at the bank isn’t. (pause) What kind of question is that? Of course I have to go to Swanky Sundaes, where else would I get high quality ice-cream sundaes? (pause) Ew, Pete’s only has like three flavors.

(long pause) Wait really? You’ll pay for it? (pause) That’s not fair! (pause) I have paid you back for the socks. (pause) They’re called scarves and I paid you back for those too. (pause) Maybe you’re just old and forgetful. (pause) Okay, that’s not fair at all, you never actually gave them to me once you got them. (pause) AUGH! I’m too ice-cream-deprived to deal with this, mom. Can’t you just buy me ice-cream and yell at me while I eat it? (pause) Why do you keep telling me no? (pause) You get Stephanie ice-cream literally all the time! (pause) Who cares if she’s fourteen and doesn’t have a job? I’m still your child too! (pause) Oh my GOD, why do you always do this? You’ve told me a million times, you should know by now that I am literally incapable of doing that. (pause)(quietly) Lord help me. (normally, exasperated) For the last time, stop telling me to act my age!
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Emulation Handbook: Patrick Rothfuss

Posted by Ayala Silverman in English 2 · Pahomov · C Band on Wednesday, November 2, 2016 at 2:53 pm
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The Secrets of Golem-Making - Ayala

Posted by Ayala Silverman in Creative Writing · Giknis · x2 Band on Friday, October 28, 2016 at 4:23 pm
​Welcome to my website! It showcases my story The Secrets of Golem-Making, which is a fantasy adventure story, following the adventures of a satyr named Mara. You don't have to learn or know anything, but I hope that you enjoy.

https://midnightmilkyway.wordpress.com/ 

Thank you for visiting!
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Planes To Israel Fly Slower Than Time

Posted by Ayala Silverman in English 2 · Pahomov · C Band on Thursday, September 29, 2016 at 12:19 am

I bounced on the balls of my feet as El Al’s security questioned my parents in the airport. Why were we going to Israel? Who we were visiting? What was our relationship with each other? This was all new to me as this was only my second time in Israel, and only the first time I went at an age I would remember. I was excited to be going and seeing all the sights, but there was also an anxious feeling at being out of the country for a few weeks.

After the security personnel witnessed my parents’ bickering, it was made clear that they were a married couple, and we were free to move on. Dragging my suitcase behind me, I looked around the airport, mindlessly following my mom. Slews of people moved about, a tangle of different languages hitting my ears. My mom’s voice broke through the other conversations as she directed me into the waiting area. I settled next to my dad, preparing myself for the two-hour wait to board.

A couple hours later, the flight attendant lady’s voice sounded over the loudspeaker, and my dad was telling me people were starting to board our plane. There was a lot of jostling and unwanted breathing on the back of my neck, and I began to feel a little bit sick from nerves. Once on the plane, I grabbed onto my mom’s arm so I wouldn’t get lost among the people in the aisles. We found our seats without incident, and I settled down for a twelve-hour flight, thinking about how I would fare navigating a hectic airport by myself.

Many naps later, I groaned as the pilot announced the descent of the plane. It started to go down, causing my ears to pop and making my stomach lurch. I ground my teeth until the plane landed, bumpily, onto the runway. Exiting the plane was a little bit wobbly for me, but I managed to make it into the airport without toppling over. Finding our bags was relatively uneventful. Supposedly, we would be meeting a small group of other students’ relatives once we got to the hotel in Jerusalem. Getting to the hotel seemed pretty easy at first. It wasn’t easy at all. Cab drivers in Israel don’t care, and once we did get a cab the language barrier was fierce. I realized this would become the norm if I decided to come here. My dad was able to communicate where we wanted to go without too much yelling, and the driver helped us cram the large luggage bags into the cab’s trunk.

Eventually, my family and I were safely deposited in front of the hotel. There was little hassle as we met the group of other students’ relatives, found our hotel rooms, and set off to visit my sister and the other students. The building was tucked away on an almost hidden street. Everyone filed in through the doors and were greeted by the corresponding student, and we were given a small tour. That night, I had my first dinner in Israel, and it really left something to be desired, especially compared to the foods we got later on. Since it was Shabbat at the time, and the head teacher was religious, there were a lot of chanting before we ate: acknowledging the Sabbath, blessings over the challah and wine, and thanking the Lord for this day of rest. I didn’t participate in singing with everybody else, but I listened for recognizable words. I was slightly disappointed in the quality of the main course, but there were plenty of persimmons to eat afterward. During the dinner, I was able to catch up with my sister and ask her questions about what Israel had been like for her so far.

As we toured through Israel, we would also be sitting in on some of her classes and visiting different family sights with her and the other students. My parents kept reminding me that I would be doing this in a few years. I figured four years was plenty of time, and I was actually excited about doing this myself. However, now that the time to go is less than a year away, those few weeks I spent in Israel barely seem like anything compared to the few months I might be spending there.

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Superlativos - Ayala Silverman y Jason Lam

Posted by Ayala Silverman in Spanish 2 · Manuel · B Band on Wednesday, September 21, 2016 at 12:32 pm
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Mi Vida E1U5 - Ayala Silverman

Posted by Ayala Silverman in Spanish 1 - Manuel - C on Sunday, March 27, 2016 at 12:18 pm
​Ayala Silverman

soy yo

la hija de una mamá inmigrante,

medio china

pero nativa de los Estados Unidos.

La más joven de mis hermanas

y más miedosa.


Veo las estrellas y palillos,

Saboreo los patos y las palomitas,

Huelo las naranjas y el arroz,

Oigo los chillos de mis sobrinos,

Toco la masa de pan de mi mamá.


Hablo inglés, pero quiero aprender otra cosa.

Corro con los desiertos y las montañas.

Floto con la sal de mar.

Leo a mis personajes favoritos.


Somos productos de Filadelfia y China,

Somos judios.

Escribimos sobre:

la familia y el mundo.

Cocinamos la comida de nuestro pueblo,

Somos diversidad y un poco locos.

Music provided by Orion

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Macbeth Pokemon - Ayala and Shamus

Posted by Ayala Silverman in English 1 - Giknis - X on Monday, January 18, 2016 at 8:28 pm
Shamus and I decided that creating an original game for our Macbeth creative project would be the best approach. We thought a play or video would be harder with only two people, and we aren’t the best actors, so we decided to cross that off the list. We didn’t want to do a playbill because we aren’t the best artists, and we didn’t think it would be that entertaining. In the end we went with a game mainly because we both like games and had an idea for designs that would work with the play’s themes and characters. We also thought it would be fun for us and for potential players.
After deciding on a game, we had to think about what the game would be about. We thought of interactive, roleplaying board games that are popular and most people might know. At first, we thought about making a Dungeons & Dragons type game, and started planning that. Then at lunch while planning, we thought it would be great to make a Pokemon type game. Because we had a decent idea of how Pokemon was played, we didn’t need to research it too much.
After Ms. Giknis approved the idea, we started thinking of characters we would make and how to present them. We had an original list of about 7 before we realized that we didn’t have some characters we met recently, or haven’t met yet, in the reading. The final product ended up having 13 cards. Once we had our characters planned, we thought about how to make the cards. We found a website where you can design your own Pokemon card, so we just had to think about the details for each card. For some characters we gave them a meaning for their type of Pokemon. For example, King Duncan would be a colorless type because he is dead and has no color in his life.
We then came up with moves, which are like actions, for each card that worked to make sure each interaction between players would end up like a scene in the book. Once we had our moves and descriptions written, we just had to add them to the actual cards. After that, we printed them out, and put them in a folder so they could all stay together.
The purpose of the project was to make a game that would be fun for the players, and at the same time could teach them about Macbeth. Since Pokemon is a very famous card game, we thought it would be a good way to teach people about Macbeth while simultaneously being fun to play. To understand the game, you don’t need to know much about Pokemon, except that it is a turn based game. To play, the players take turns fighting back and forth, until one player’s Pokemon faints. In our game, a player doesn't necessarily have to faint, but instead the round ends when the scene would. For Duncan and Banquo, they would die, and that is where the round ends. The entirety of the game would be played once we reached the end of the book.

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U2 #8 - Ayala Silverman

Posted by Ayala Silverman in Technology - Freshman - Hull - b1 on Monday, January 11, 2016 at 1:30 pm
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In class we watched the show Frontline - Digital Nation, which talked about media, how people use it, and the affect it has on people who use and don't use it. I distinctly remember seeing how different teenagers used media to post about themselves and talk to others, and how it wasn't used in the best way. It's important to watch shows like this so that people can see what goes on in media. It's also good to watch because it tells us what a lot of dangers and hazards are so we can better protect ourselves. If I have a family in the future I would make rules and set limits for using media. I would also make sure to go over what they should try to be aware for and what to avoid. It's important to talk with family about media to keep them safe and make sure they're okay. I would tell parents that don't know how to protect their kids online a summary of what can go on in media and that they need to check to see if their kids are using media in bad ways.
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Me Slide 2 - Ayala Silverman

Posted by Ayala Silverman in Technology - Freshman - Hull - b1 on Wednesday, December 9, 2015 at 7:28 am
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I realized that less is more and continuity is important. I got rid of the extra words because they didn't contributed anything to the slide. I changed the color of the words so they were closer to the color of the heart. This made the slide easier to look at because there are more similar colors.
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Poema - Ayala Silverman

Posted by Ayala Silverman in Spanish 1 - Manuel - C on Monday, November 23, 2015 at 6:24 pm
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neophyte
Me fasciNa leer y escuchar música
no mE gusta nada practicar deportes
sOy muy baja
soy un Poco trabajadora
soy Habladora
No me gusta nada aYudar en casa
Tengo 14 años
Mi nombre Es Ayala
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My Slide

Posted by Ayala Silverman in Technology - Freshman - Hull - b1 on Sunday, November 22, 2015 at 11:09 pm
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While it seems like the slide is only covering a little bit of me, it actually shows several things. As it's labeled, the guy represents me and the unicorns represent everything that I do in my spare time. At first glance, you wouldn't be able to tell what the guy's interests and hobbies were. With the unicorns representing my interests, this idea is similar with me. When people learn more about me on a personal level, some are shocked or think I'm lying. That's why the main picture in the slide is the picture of the guy holding two tiny unicorns. 

I made the size of the picture as big as possible so people really focused on it. The picture behind the text is made up of darker colors, so I made the text bright green to make it really stand out. There's the big picture, then there's the text so the reader can know how the slide explains me.
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Home Network, Silverman

Posted by Ayala Silverman in Technology - Freshman - Hull - b1 on Wednesday, October 28, 2015 at 12:40 pm
My ISP is Verizon fios, so I have a fiber cable connecting to my router.  Connected through WiFi I have a tablet, six cell phones, two laptops, a TV, and a wifi extender.  I also have two hardwired desktop PCs and a printer that is WiFi connected as well.  An OMG moment for me was when we watched that video in class and I learned about what happened behind the scenes of the internet.  I would want others to know what they have connected to their network and how expensive it can get.
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Who am I Online? - Ayala Silverman

Posted by Ayala Silverman in Technology - Freshman - Hull - b1 on Wednesday, October 28, 2015 at 12:11 pm
We watched I Am A Witness in Tech class about Jack, a boy being bullied by his classmates.  We watched the video two times, once without clicking the button to help Jack, and another to see what happens when we did help Jack.  The video sort of showed how bullying can happen anywhere and in any form.  It also showed how many people don't step up and help, even if they see what's going on.  

There's not much on me online.  A few of my old projects and another girl's website for becoming Bat Mitzvah are what appear right away.  I doubt people who search up my name would randomly click on the websites that feature my name nonchalantly, so I'm not sure whether I would be perceived as anything. 

The goal of internet trolls is to get a reaction, usually a negative one, out of other people on the internet.  This is made easier because of anonymity granted by being online.  Anonymity online makes the internet trolls' jobs easier, but it also allows for people to have conversations and opinions without giving too much of themselves away to strangers.  


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