The design chosen by Jacob is very clean and minimalistic, which is soft on the eyes while still providing a lot of information. Each of the elements he gave is labeled, and each section is bolded. The visuals are relevant to the information that Jacob gave. I also liked that Jacob took the extra step to create a custom family tree specifically for his emulation scene, which was one of his three elements, (the others being Narration and Time Jumps.). Overall, a very solid handbook, one that an avid reader would enjoy reading.
I was one that peer-edited part of your template and found that you made very good improvements in the explanation part of your emulations. I appreciate that you made an actual family tree that connects with the emulated story.
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