1) Spoke clearly.
2) What you were saying made sense.
3) I like the ending image.
4) I like that you explained your activities.
5) I like that you gave the days you did those activities.
Recommendations:
1) I feel like it would have been fun if you added music to it.
2)I like the transitions
I noticed that in some parts of the project there were some mumbling. That was the only concern that I had but everything else was great. Job well done.
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