You did a great job being consistent with your color scheme. The gradient yellow looks really good behind your text.
You also did a great job incorporating the vocabulary, layout, and POV in your story. You used great descriptive words throughout your scene. The only downside I see is that your title isn't centered.
I like the way that you layout the handbook. I like that you included a table of contents which makes it easy to navigate through the book. Everything is well formatted and easy to read.
Your scene is really good! All of the components that you talked about in "Edge of Eternity" were in your story and were executed very well. You used complex vocab within your story, you made the point of view third person, and you broke up your scene as the author did in the book that you were reading. I think that the design is very professional. The colors go well together and are easy on the eye. Good job!
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